Attention: Forgetful elephants who fail to remember by their 13th birthday are forbidden to marry and must be banished to the dark side of Royal Mountain to live alone until death. (Peridot Banishment Law)
When cousins and best friends Jonathan and Molly Wiggins team up to do something, they’re unbeatable! But when Baranak, a white-opal elephant in a mysterious computer game, directs them to a secret portal into a paradise land inhabited by sophisticated, talking elephants to help save Peter–a forgetful elephant turning thirteen in seven days–from a lonely and treacherous future on the dark side of Royal Mountain, their friendship is sorely tested.
Peridot is a hidden, idyllic land free of technology, electricity, sewers, skyscrapers, cars, and everything else manmade. Personified, talking, gemstone-colored elephants have lived there simply since the beginning of time, keeping their land a delightful paradise. Join me as we travel through Peridot in our imaginations, just like our brave protagonists, cousins Jonathan and Molly, did in the first book of the series The Secret Portal. Come on! Don’t lollygag!
First, we walk to the far back of the cousins’ shared twenty-acreage, passing their tree fort. Reaching the birch tree path, we creep forward, knowing we’ll eventually trigger the portal and disappear faster than we can say eleph—
Shot out of what felt like a giant enclosed slide, we land on thick, cushiony grass green as a peridot gemstone. We step cautiously to a break in a delightful curly hedge fringing the land and stand by a towering twisted trunk tree where the cousins stood. Only they were actually there. We shiver—even though it had to be 85 degrees here—frightened as they were not knowing if humans, trolls, giant spiders, dragons, aliens, or—best not to overthink it—live here. If only all of the bookstores hadn’t run out of the popular Peridot the Secret Portal novels before we could get copies and read what creatures live here!
We scan the low, gently rolling hills dotted with colorful blossoms and shady umbrella-shaped trees and climb the highest hill to view the rest of the land. The blue forget-me-knots are soft and flexible, and we sit to remove our shoes and socks, sighing in pleasure as we stand, and our feet sink into what feels like shredded fleece. Someone points out the vast round houses abundant with window boxes and gardens blending into the scenery, and we plop onto our stomachs, not wanting the creatures who occupy them to spot us.
Piercing the tropical blue horizon north in the distance is a flat-topped mountain, its face studded with pine trees. A cheery golden—waterfall?—splashes the valley below. To its right bends a dirt path leading to the top of the mountain where a flower-fringed brook feeds the golden fall. Further right sits a huge glistening round castle house, its jagged crenels sparking as if on fire. Left of the brook in a fairy meadow abounding with frolicking iridescent flying things, bright sunshine glints off the tinkling leaves of a gargantuan tree. Further left looms a soaring, sheer rock wall, shading the dreaded dark side of the mountain below.
Eager to explore more, we head left, west, along the inviting curly hedge on flat grassy land for a few miles, knowing we’re too far away from the Secret Portal to flee predators but itching to
see more. We climb another tall hill filled with periwinkle blue sweet asylum flowers that smell like honey and see a ribbon of shining gold some miles away. On our way to check it out, we smell something else that makes our stomachs growl hungrily but can’t place what it is. When we reach the golden ribbon, we discover it is a river fed by the fall. Luminous gemstone-colored elephants wade, float, drink, and swim in it, talking and laughing like people. Across from the river, the land is flatter and lightly sprinkled with nutmeg-colored boulders.
Without thinking, we fly east like birds—that’s what’s great about using your imagination!—to the center of the land, where we spy a sprawling outdoor market resembling a flea market at home. It’s bustling with cheerful elephants colored like a multiple-stranded gemstone necklace. Two gemstone elephant statues tower in the middle of a fountain. Water sprays out of their trunks, showering the young elephants playing in its basin. A nearby orchestra plays festive
background music. Wandering around, we see vendors selling just about everything our markets do: books, crafts, furniture, food, personal care products, tacos, toys, you name it. Elephants stroll around with ice cream cones the size of sapling trees and donuts as big as truck tires.
The land is flatter further east, and we can see fields of Monet-looking flowers, vegetables, and crops watered by meandering narrow rivulets branching off from the fall. Satisfied and hungry, we return to the Secret Portal, flying over vegetable, fruit, and juice stands, playgrounds, picket fences, meadows, and scurrying animals with glistening fur.
We stare at the barely noticeable portal on this side, swirling with faded suggestions of gemstone colors, worrying if it will take us back home when it swallows us up whole. What if
we end up somewhere else entirely, like Antarctica or outer space? We aren’t outfitted for either.
“You go, come back, and let us know,” one of you wimps suggests.
“Yeah, you got us into this,” another of you says. “I mean, it was awesome, to be sure, but not if we’re stuck here forever. We still don’t know what creatures are in charge here.”
Rude, I think. And here, I gave you a tour of a paradise land that no one else besides Jonathan and Molly has ever experienced. I decide to teach the ingrates a lesson.
“Okay,” I say. “If I don’t come back, that means you don’t want to go where I did,” I fib. I mean, isn’t it obvious if I return immediately, that’s where I didn’t want to go?” I give them another chance. “Step forward if you would like to join me.” All the kids rush to stand by my side, happy to go home or on another adventure, but the adults sit down in protest, looking like those gemstone elephant statues, only not as magnificent.
“Let’s go, children,” I say, and we trigger the portal, disappearing.
That was a week ago, and I heard on the news that the adults who followed me to Peridot are still missing. I sigh and jump back through the Secret Portal to retrieve them.
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